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Year 3 Homework 5th December

Hello everyone!

Building on our work on super sentences we would like you to write 3 different sentences on the blog this week.

All of your sentences MUST include a powerful verb (eg. dashed, stormed, exploded) and an adverb (eg. quickly, frantically, heavily).

Challenge yourselves further to include 3 different connectives (eg. although, however, consequently).

Make sure your spelling is correct – remember to use a dictionary if you are unsure. Please share your posts with your parents before you post them so they can see your amazing sentence too!

46 Comments

  1. jacob

    December 18, 2013 @ 4:45 pm          Reply

    george i love your powerfull verbs

  2. Mrs Bland

    December 13, 2013 @ 2:41 pm          Reply

    Hello this is Mrs Bland speaking!! Like Mrs Milton I have really enjoyed reading your sentences and would definitely like to hear what you think of one anothers work. Please try and leave some comments for your friends and we will have another discussion about this work next week. Once again well done and happy blogging – just one other way of helping you progress with your work.

  3. Mrs. Milton

    December 13, 2013 @ 8:54 am          Reply

    Wow!! Year 3 these sentences are absoutely fabulous! Well done everyone. This week it would be great if you could go back onto the blog and make a comment about someone else’s sentence – what do you like about what they have written? Congratulations again on your super sentences!

  4. Ben.marriott

    December 11, 2013 @ 8:50 pm          Reply

    I angrily smashed a plate on the floor however, it did not break.

    I gracefully swam although,I swam into the side of the swimming pool.

    I carefully did a somersault on the trampoline however,I bounced of the trampoline.

  5. Aaron Mathewson

    December 11, 2013 @ 7:56 am          Reply

    I splashed in the water however I splatted face first in the water!

  6. Capucine

    December 10, 2013 @ 7:04 pm          Reply

    I saw a fast flash in the sky and it was Santa flying secretly in the air like a jet plane.
    My jolly friends were pretending to be a reindeer eating carrots whilst pulling the sleigh.
    Santa was visiting the houses quietly and delivering presents to the lovely children.
    Mrs Claus efficiently prepared a fabulous dinner for the Elves, Santa and the reindeer but forgot to make a gorgeous dessert.

  7. Sam

    December 10, 2013 @ 7:52 am          Reply

    My nanny and granddad has got a dog called Archie.

    He is a really naughty dog!!!

    Nanny and Granddad,in age, are over 70.

    • Mrs Bland

      December 13, 2013 @ 2:56 pm          Reply

      I’d like to learn more about the dog and would like to see some powerful verbs in your sentences – thank you.

  8. liam

    December 9, 2013 @ 10:14 pm          Reply

    I stormed up the stairs as my sister made me cross.
    I kicked the ball as quickly i could through the air and it landed in a pond.
    Liam however discovered that his sister was taking his chocolates and hiding them.

  9. Cameron

    December 9, 2013 @ 9:23 pm          Reply

    The light exploded instantly in the middle of the night.

    Santa flew swity to Australia first and then he dashed quickly to another part of the world.

    The rain in Thailand was so heavy me and my friend from Australia Locky quickly ran to dance in the rain for 2 hour.

  10. Ben Heffernan

    December 9, 2013 @ 7:44 pm          Reply

    I dashed across the Kitchen floor, however i tripped over some toys.

    My dad zoomed across the school car park, knocking over a plant.

    The volcano erupted very loudly, so I quickly ran away.

  11. Sebastian

    December 9, 2013 @ 4:47 pm          Reply

    The man raced across the bumpy road although it was dark
    The man shouted angrily at the boy.
    The baby cried noisily.

  12. ben brookes

    December 9, 2013 @ 4:40 pm          Reply

    rudolf dashed across the sky
    with heavy santa sat in the sleigh
    although santa quickly got up and down the chimney

  13. Poppy

    December 9, 2013 @ 3:40 pm          Reply

    I
    I went to the beach and it was extremely fun, although it was unbearingly hot.
    We built a fantastic snowman in our back garden, however my clumsy dad knocked it over.
    We decorated our Christmas tree with shiny angels and glittery stars and then we finally finished, it looked beautiful.

  14. Joseph

    December 8, 2013 @ 8:01 pm          Reply

    I speedily swam across the long pool however I nearly sank.

    I sprinted energetically all morning, eventually I had to take a break.

    I heartily swished my squash racket left and right and finally I hit the little black ball.

  15. Owen

    December 8, 2013 @ 7:19 pm          Reply

    Gingerbread band marches quietly through the town then stopped to let the people watch.

    Santa jumps into his ginormous sleigh to fly quickly to school.

    I put my cape on slowly and dived out of the window, however I forgot to open the window and banged my head.

  16. Sophia

    December 8, 2013 @ 6:49 pm          Reply

    Santa has lots of energetic reindeers however Rudolf is the leader.

    I am hoping to get an enormous pile of presents although I must be exceptionally good.

    I thoroughly enjoy decorating the Christmas Tree nevertheless it is my sisters turn to put the angel on the top.

  17. Matilda

    December 8, 2013 @ 6:48 pm          Reply

    My huge brain was bulging with extraordinary ideas, however, I managed to write them all down before my brain exploded.
    When we bought the scrumptious christmas pudding my tummy started rumbling like a volcano,but i had to wait before ii could eat it.
    when i found out we were going to the mere spa i happily dashed upstairs to get my cosy on,unfortunately i fell half way up the stairs.

  18. Jack

    December 8, 2013 @ 5:59 pm          Reply

    1:One day Joe boomed into a superhero and quickly saved the world.
    2:One day Mark quickly dashed into the opticians to get some glasses, however it was the market.
    3:One day Louis hurridly ran to the gymnastics competition and stormed it, winning gold!!

  19. Phoebe

    December 8, 2013 @ 5:19 pm          Reply

    The rider jumped the course perfectly and then won first prize.
    I ate my dinner too quickly and later I had tummy ache.
    I dashed down the drive too quickly and consequently fell over.

  20. Freya

    December 8, 2013 @ 4:37 pm          Reply

    We picked a fabulous tree however, it was prickly but we were still excited about decorating it.

    The gymnast was thrilled to win second place with her routine, even though she made a mistake she carefully finished it off!

    I can ice skate on my own and glide gently across the rink, sometimes I even manage to spin.

  21. Josh

    December 8, 2013 @ 3:30 pm          Reply

    I bounded excitedly across the room to open my presents under the tree although I had to wait patiently for Mum and Dad.
    Santa’s reindeer galloped frantically through the night to deliver all the presents on time, while the children slept.
    The lights on the Christmas tree shined brightly like the twinkling stars in the night sky, whilst the snow fell heavily outside.

  22. matthew

    December 8, 2013 @ 2:42 pm          Reply

    When I played football today, I dived across the goal as quickly as I could to push the ball past the post and because of that, we won the game.

    We went to watch my mummy run the Yule Yomp this morning. We saw her sprint across the finishing line happily although she was quite tired.

    My little brother usually screams when he is going to sleep but last night, he settled quietly.

  23. Millie

    December 8, 2013 @ 2:08 pm          Reply

    The mouse scamperd speedily away from the owl however the owl caught the mouse.

    The man sprinted quickly however he did not win the race.

    The robber sneakily tiptoed to the diamond however the cops caught him.

  24. Alex

    December 8, 2013 @ 1:32 pm          Reply

    I silently nibbled my brother’s chocolate whilst he was asleep.
    I sprinted quickly to the ice cream van.
    I stealthily crept downstairs, however my mum spotted me.

  25. Freddie H

    December 8, 2013 @ 9:53 am          Reply

    My little brother quickly crashed to the floor !
    Next, I sped rapidly to school as fast as I could.
    Eventually I arrived there and directly put my coat on my peg.

  26. Jenifer

    December 8, 2013 @ 8:42 am          Reply

    The Icescater twirled across the rink but
    however she fell over.

    The kitten raced after the mice but however she didn’t get it.

    The runner sped across the field, although she didn’t win.

  27. Tina

    December 7, 2013 @ 8:41 am          Reply

    I can’t wait for Christmas and Santa with Rudolph dashing quickly through the snow although Christmas is hard work.
    In fact for Christmas you have to hurry up to decorate but do it carefully so the baubles don’t break.
    Also Christmas is hard work because you need to speed up to get your Christmas cards done but do them slowly so they look neat.

  28. daisy

    December 6, 2013 @ 7:02 pm          Reply

    Rudolf and Dasher are pransing around with Pranser playing Christmas tig.

    Santa Is in a hurry, for Santa is late for Christmas eve and it would be a shame for Christmas day.

    Pranser and Dancer are making a great big party for the other Reindeer’s and Santa shush do not tell them.

  29. Emma

    December 6, 2013 @ 5:59 pm          Reply

    I twisted round quickly while everyone was watching and finally made it.

    Father Christmas zoomed swiftly across the sky with lots of presents on the back of his sleigh.

    My cat purred loudly so I could not go to sleep.

  30. alyssa

    December 6, 2013 @ 5:10 pm          Reply

    Rudolph exploded into life knowing that Christmas day was just around the corner, however the elves had not yet finished wrapping all the presents.

    After frantically finishing the wrapping, Santa Claus dashed to his sleigh and was soon on his merry way to deliver all of the colourful presents to children around the world.

    Delivering all the presents was quickly done by Santa and his reindeer, and he was soon back at the North Pole where Mrs Claus was waiting with a huge mug of hot chocolate with extra marshmallows.

  31. Sophie

    December 6, 2013 @ 4:16 pm          Reply

    Last year I saw the amazing Santa Claus soaring speedily through the air, then he suddenly disappeared.

    The elves were busily pushing the presents into the wrapping machine but it ran out of paper.

    Mummy carefully hooked lots of shimmery baubles onto the Christmas tree, however the elegant fairy flew away up the dusty chimney.

  32. George

    December 6, 2013 @ 3:57 pm          Reply

    I was skipping however I suddenly fell over.
    I was playing tennis but the ball surprisingly hit me!
    I was playing football however I saved a fantastic shot

  33. Rebecca Knowles

    December 5, 2013 @ 8:02 pm          Reply

    I quickly dashed across the classroom, however I fell over.
    The ballerina pirouetted gracefully on the mat, but she did not win the competition
    The firework erupted loudly, cosequently making me cover my ears.

  34. Jack

    December 5, 2013 @ 7:38 pm          Reply

    I’m putting powerful verb’s in sentences. So like Rudolph was dashing ahead of the Reindeers.
    Dad was pretending to be superman gliding through the air like mad.
    Fraser had 2 bananas thinking they were guns booming.
    Superman is the reaI one he dives through the air like a real hero because he is.
    And Fraser is not a live meany or bad guy.

  35. Sofia Morton

    December 5, 2013 @ 7:13 pm          Reply

    One day I went to the swimming pool, it was really good however I tripped and fell over but it was fun.

    Suddenly one day it was Christmas I ran down the stairs and took a present from under the
    tree , I loved it so much.

    At Christmas I had a puppy as my present it was so cute , it had big eyes .

  36. Evie

    December 5, 2013 @ 7:10 pm          Reply

    Jolly Father Christmas slowly climbed to the top of the creaking stairs. He suddenly stopped to check his naughty/nice book, however he discovered he had left it on the glittering sleigh outside.

    The brave fireman rescued the terrified cat from a raging river after having fallen from a nobbly narrow branch.

    I went to the scorching seaside but the boiling hot bumpy pebbles really burnt my tired sweaty feet.

  37. lewis healy

    December 5, 2013 @ 5:52 pm          Reply

    sweetly silently gently

    dashing smashing super

    awesome amazing talented

  38. Sam

    December 5, 2013 @ 5:05 pm          Reply

    The second scentence should say the stars were twinkling brightly although it
    was a cloudy night.

    I realy enjoyed doing that .I want to do that more often.

  39. Daisy

    December 5, 2013 @ 4:55 pm          Reply

    1. The toddler tried to dash frantically for a biscuit, however she fell over!

    2. I enjoyed watching the fireworks as they quickly exploded into the sky, consequently turning it red, green and blue.

    3. The volcano erupted heavily resulting in a river of flowing larva.

  40. Sam

    December 5, 2013 @ 4:51 pm          Reply

    I was sprinting speedily because I was late.
    The stars were twinkling although it was a cloudy night.
    I sleepily crawled into bed then closed my eyes

  41. George

    December 5, 2013 @ 4:32 pm          Reply

    Fred quickly rushed to class however it had already started!

    The beautiful sunset slowly disappeared over the horizon consequently it started to go dark.

    Matt was playing a competitive game of football, somehow he took a shot and it rattled the cross bar!

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